As a class, we wrote a persuasive radio commercial explaining why we think Fieldcrest is the best school. We have been learning about how to write persuasively. Here is the success criteria we came up with for persuasive writing:
- a topic sentence with an opinion
- at least 3 strong reasons (our commercial has 6!)
- an ending statement
- 5 star sentences
You can listen to our commercial below and I think we will convince you that we really do have the best school!
Vicky Zanatta
5/28/2012 11:07:49 am

Great work!!!

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Maria
5/28/2012 12:12:58 pm

Nicely done!!!

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MA
5/30/2012 08:43:12 am

I think are raido comashale was asesome I loved it so much!!!!!!

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Michelle
6/4/2012 07:02:11 am

very cool!

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S.N.
6/9/2012 03:05:51 am

you are a very creative teacher and I like your hard work.Thanks for letting us know!

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6/30/2012 02:28:24 am

MS.FERGUSON MISS YOU SO SO SO MUCH!!!!!!!!

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6/30/2012 06:25:23 am

MA.FERGUSON CAN YOU REPLY PLEASE!!!!!!!

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